story for illustrated book

Here is my first story for the illustrated book. It's gonna be 12 pages, 6 illustrations(one for each color), board book style. any thoughts?


Rainbow Halloween

Red is the blood that dracula drinks
Orange are the pumpkins that sit on the porch
Yellow are the eyes that glow in the dark
Green are the warts on a witches face
Blue are the ghosts haunting the graveyard
...and Purple is the candy that you get for being so brave on such a night!